Thursday, 12 January 2017
My Team SUPREME (Incomplete) (1st Draft) + Feedback
This is the first draft of my music video
The outro needs to be filmed so is blank and the other blank Sections of the video are areas that I need to re-shoot for reasons such as overexposure, imperfections or a lack of variety in my footage.
The comments section will also be open to peer feedback, the questions viewers are asked to respond to are
1. Do you think that the font used on the title cards is appropriate?
2. Do you think that there is enough variety in shot types?
3. Do you think that the video fits into the artists image?
4. Can you tell that when Meech's verse is being performed the character is supposed to be a darker version of himself than when Erick's verse is being performed?
5. Do you have any other suggestions or feedback?
A user called TEASTERFORD 22 commented:
1. I think the font is great and fits well with the group's music
2. I think there are good shots but there needs to be more diversity
3. I think it fits very well, especially the 666 at the start and the costume of Meech
4. Yeah this is clear by the aggression and clothing
5. It's good, just put in more variety and show the drug side a bit more to help show the story
Nobody else commented so I asked some more people
One
1. Yeah, I think it has a cool style and fits with the group
2. Needs to be more
3. Yeah, especially the drugs
4. Yeah, I thought so
5. You could make it more interesting with more shots or effects or something.
Two
1. Yeah, its cool
2. needs more really
3. yeah, especially with the location for the second guy
4. yeah, because of the drugs and the same actor
5. more variety
Three
1. Yeah, especially the use of the red, it fits the almost evil image people associate the group with.
2. I would put some more in there, play with angles more like the canted shot of Meech crouching.
3. Yeah, especially because of the 666 and the outfits, maybe add some effects though.
4. Yeah, the aggression and the clothing/location show this.
5. Just add some variety and complete the missing pieces, plus maybe some effects or something.
The responses to question 1 shows that people really liked the font used for the title cards.
The responses to the second question are positive for the shots that are already included but tell me that I should include some more diverse shots too, I like this idea and will probably use some more diverse ones for the second rapper's (Meech's) verse to represent the feelings created by the drugs that he took.
Question 3's responses are very positive and make me glad that people think it fits well into the artist's image, I'm also glad people like the use off 666. The idea to use effects is good, I was even considering it before due to the psychedelic/drug-themed nature of the music, especially within Meech's verse.
The responses to the 4th question are positive and show that this element of the music video is going well.
The extra comments just further solidify the idea that I should use some more diverse shots and also show that lots of people think I should use effects which is further pushing me towards exploring this idea.
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